Line of direction, a brief tutorial

I’m working on a novella currently, and I just fixed a bit of awkwardness that I realized was a useful primer on what we mean when we say, “Line of direction.”

First version:

“I... oh!” [Name] said. “I downloaded a skin on how to use it. It’s an antique.”

“I see that.” The officer held the lockbox out unwaveringly, a gentle pressure of polite social expec…

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